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Thursday 4 April 2013

haiku

               This is my first attempt  of writing a Haiku. I dont know how far I have been able to manage it.  I am open to suggestions. There is always a ray of  hope  if, not now some day I may succeed!!                                               

                                                          Rainbow's wish fulfilled ?



probinsya  province
                                                                              

                                                     
                                                               Sun  blue sky

                                             Warring  clouds  under    fighting sun

                                                         greens  enjoying below .



                                                              

                                      A desolate tree


                                                          spring and summer breath of picture 4
                                                                         

                                                                   Grieve not desolate

                                                       meloncoly men ,leave no hope

                                                                  happiness will prevail .
                                             
                                                     

Pics courtesy google
  
                                                                             




                                          

8 comments:

  1. Simply beautiful!
    I admire you, Ma'am for trying out new things, learning and experimenting, and so keen at observing too! Kudos to you :)

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  2. Thanks a lot Shilpa .I feel elated by your encouraging comments.

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  3. You are an inspiring soul ,Usha maám..Always ready to learn and experiment new things ..You spread lots of positive energy..and I really adore you for that..Kudos to your spirit !!Lovely set of Haiku..Keep writing ..

    P.S I am a bit irregular these days on blogosphere..pardon me for that.

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    1. Thanks Odizzey. Your inspiring comments matter a lot to me. It is because of the encouragment of friends like you, that I get motivated.

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    1. Thank you Anil.,for your inspiring remarks.

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  5. first attempt, though a very beautiful one ! you have imbibed it very well enough. looking forward to more from you:)

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    1. I feel encouraged to write more . Thanks for appreciating.

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